Help!

Hi kids! I don't know if anyone is checking in, to see if anything new is going on here, so I'm taking a chance. Would anyone be wiling to do crits on my MS? I'd really like to start submitting it soon, and the more feedback I can get, the better. If you'd be interested, leave a comment here, or drop me an e-mail, and I'll forward it along to you (at least the first chapter or two, which I've been polishing up the past 2 weeks or so).

Thanks everyone!