My blurb...Charity

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Here is my book blurb...not anything polished and ready for a bookcover, but it could be worse.

Going back home after years of military service, Lori begins her new job as an onsite stable caretaker. She thought she would be able to easily step back into life at the stables but finds opposition at ever turn in the form of vicious, self serving, promiscuous stable hand, and a park ranger that she can't get rid of, but then again doesn't want to miss either.

Accidents are happening at the stables and the wildlife rangers that patrol the park grounds are responsible for the investigations. Chris Owens is tasked with the job of finding out if these really are just accidents or is someone causing trouble that could get someone hurt, or even killed. His job would be a lot easier if he could just keep his distance from the new caretaker.

*I know it is kinda choppy and blah, but it is a new story and I am still working on it in chunks. But that is a very general blurb.